Tuesday, January 27, 2015

Civil Disobedience



Muhammad Gandhi first brought up civil disobedience. He was the leader of the vast independent movement against Great Britain. During the era of civil disobedience, Great Britain was one of the most powerful countries to dominate weaker nations. Under British control, India was home to many natural resources. Indians interrupted the ambitions of Britain with a revolution. Previously in history, violence was the main component to achievement. The United States is symbolized as violence according to Howard Zinn. Howard Zinn included the views and events described opposingly to the school’s textbooks. Gandhi proved to the world that something can be achieved through nonviolent resistance.
   Gandhi realized that violence would only anger the dominate power. Coming to a compromise wouldn’t have to be forced. Unlike the United States, Gandhi used a nonviolent tactic to gain independence for India. He rallied large amounts of protestors to persuade them to practice civil disobedience. It required the people to disobey laws that were unlawful. They would be beaten without resisting. They didn’t fight back or say profound things. They accepted blows from nighsticks and punches. Surprisingly, there were less casualties than if they were to use violence. Not only did Britain decide to give independence, millions of lives were saved. Gandhi’s way of approaching disputes has prevented hatred from being spread. 
Civil disobedience is an effective method to reform the government to benefit the citizens. Civil disobedience would work in our society. The government is restricted from using violence against its people. If we were to peacefully demonstrate against an unlawful action or behavior, it would influence others, creating a widespread of movement. And if the government were to cause harm to the peaceful demonstrators, an uproar and hatred against the government will rise, the government would then be pressured to cooperate with the people.
  Violence should not be a method to rely on to make progress. Violence would erupt more hatred and dispute among society. The government would weaken and probably collapse. Innocent lives would be taken away. If we were to rely on peaceful civil disobedience, we would be able to rely on peaceful civil disobedience, we would be able to achieve far more than with violence and do not have to sacrifice lives. 

6 comments:

  1. For what it is, the essay is well written. But when you talk about civil disobedience, you got to talk about Martin Luther King Jr., or the protests of the Vietnam War. Also the essay is not 1500 words. Other than that great essay.

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  2. Although this essay does not full fill the requirements, it is an adequate essay. There should be at least three evidence. The counterclaim of Howard Zinn is very effective when the writer is arguing for civil disobedience. The only example that the writer mentions is about Gandhi as well. However, the essay is well structured and it flows smoothly.

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  3. The introduction stated too much of the information that should be on the body paragraphs. The evidence was stated very well through out the essay and supported the claims. Many sources of historical evidence was used . The essay flows well and is structured very stable.

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  4. Very well organized and thought out essay. Your essay has many quotes and evidence ranging from Gandhi to King. You have many evidence that supports your thesis and your body paragraphs back up your thesis. But there should be at least three evidence and you mentioning Howard Zinn was very surprising but very effective.

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  5. THis essay is well written and organized. The essay has a good flow to making it easy to read for the readers. However, the introduction has too much information about Gandhi, the intro should be a little bit more brief. Also, there is not enough evidence for there should be at least three. But the mentioning of Zinn was very effective.

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  6. The writer just uses evidence from Gandhi to support his thesis on civil disobedience. When writing on a topic like this, Martin Luther King is the perfect example and would've made your essay a stronger one if you incorporated evidence from his experience. Either way, this essay is well constructed and attracts the reader.

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